"As she joined the fray, her inner fires lit. With eyes ablaze, she pulled the string of her bow causing a magic arrow to appear. The burning arrows were clearly visible she knew. But they made big smoky holes in whatever she hit. With a little luck her burning anger would also set her target on fire. Just like a promise she points her finger at the first victim not bothering the heat of the burning arrows tip." This is fantasy, so it may really work that way. But it could also be that she drew the arrow from somewhere, just as the fiery streak suggests. But when she lets fly, she will have a sore knee, as the bow collides with it One more detail I noticed - where is your light source? I wonder where the shadow from the string comes from. But all in all itīs a beautiful picture with a nice coloring and a good view for anatomy.