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My new piece for my portfolio, thi is my version of Suntail Hawk from Magic the Gathering (©Wizard of the Coast) 
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:iconrmassarani:
Hey there! This is an awesome piece, definitely one of your best from what I've seen from your gallery. I love the dramatic lighting and how abstract the background is - that's great. The pose and overall composition are also working quite well.

One thing you might want to consider is adding just a little bit of atmospheric perspective to the wing that is further away from the viewer. The values on that wing are kinda close to the rest of the body and by lowering that you would probably achieve more depth. You actually did it on the very tip of the feathers, but it might work if you apply it to the whole wing.

Also, since there's a really strong lightsource, this might be a good opportunity to use some subsurface scattering (when the light hits blood particles and bounces out of the skin). You can do that pretty easily with the color dodge tool, I guess. It would add some saturation to the hawk and make it feel more alive.


Good job (:
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
Amazing :D
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shiprock Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank Jacob :D 
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
Your welcome :)
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Macrinso Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Coolsies
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shiprock Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank iNSaNiTYDRagon2000 :)
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Macrinso Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Np shiprock
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